To improve your practical work do the following: 1) Change the typography layout on the double page spread and work on the title size/layout. 2) On the content page, I think you still need more stories listed. Also, on the 'win' circle the text doesn't look centred - correct this. 3) On the cover, work on improving the masthead.
Overall, your final practical work demonstrates proficiency/excellent in the following areas: * Producing material appropriate to target audience * Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout * Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes * Accurately using language and register * Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task * Appropriately integrating illustration and text * Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set * Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing
To improve your practical work do the following:
ReplyDelete1) Change the typography layout on the double page spread and work on the title size/layout.
2) On the content page, I think you still need more stories listed. Also, on the 'win' circle the text doesn't look centred - correct this.
3) On the cover, work on improving the masthead.
Overall, your final practical work demonstrates proficiency/excellent in the following areas:
ReplyDelete* Producing material appropriate to target audience
* Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout
* Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes
* Accurately using language and register
* Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task
* Appropriately integrating illustration and text
* Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set
* Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing